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Superb
As with all of your work this is is simply amazing. The story, music and animations are all top notch as usual. I usually prefer to review submissions to offer some sort of guidance or constructive criticism but, from time to time I feel compelled to praise a piece of work and this is one of those times. Excellent through and through and best of luck to your work on the feature film, I for one am eagerly awaiting its completion!
Quite well done!
Very well done, the animation style is excellent the story was interesting. The story ended VERY abruptly, the guy was about to say something else and it was cut a little late you might want to work on the transition for the next part. The only other issue was the voice track, the voice actors were very flat, I understand you are working with friends and its not easy to come by good voice talent for flash movies, Its just something to be aware of & something to work on. Maybe have readings and practice it a bit more if you have time to do so, if not its still a very passable movie but, with better voice acting you could see some real recognition. All in all a well done movie keep up the good work. (It may have potential for video game spin offs in the future as well, something else to think about)
Hi NinjaC7, Im happy your enjoyed the style, I really wanted something remember-able and cute but at the same time.. kick ass, So I turned to this simplified style. The Story did end abruptly due carelessness of when movieclips within movieclip's finished, my apologises.
The voice actors are mostly from VoiceActingAlliance forums.. I'm very new to having voice acting in my animations and script writing a believable story.. Casting was a rush.. and so was the script. I never really thought id finish this so its a bit of a shock. Now with it out of the way i'd like to sit down and properly organise bit by bit and take time with everything.. Ie.. Storyboards... organising audio, artwork.. etc.
Video game wise I used to have an older account.. my animations were... well.. okay I suppose, and I made an old crappy FPS game.. which was crappy.. I used buttons on enemy's it was just bad. I have worked on many games since and know how to approach games now.. so maybe in the future there will be a new game with SWAT on the title :)
Thank you for your review and your comments and thoughts will be taken into account into making a better sequel.
I like it but...
Really cool game, I like the animation and style but, where is the sound?! This would be much higher rated if it had some sound effects and background music.
Thanks man. Possibly some sound incoming soon.
Excellent!
There isnt much to say as it was Excellent, I could play that for hours its quite fun and would be addictive if there were more missions! so I guess thats the only problem its too short lol, If you have alotta time on your hands make a long one thats like an hr or 2 to complete and It will be PERFECT . I'm anxiously awaiting the next one. Great Job!!!!
Whats your problem?
What was the point of this submission? The girl killed her mother (Not funny) The girl has to live with the fact that she killed her mother (Not funny) The girl is in a correctional facility for killing her mother (yup you guessed it, Not funny). The game was actually rather inappropreate, you seem to be condoning Matricide or at the very least making light of that incident.
Your a 14 year old that thinks your parents are evil and opressing you since they didnt buy you the new Avenge sevenfold CD right? You need to grow up, if you are actually over the age of 18 seek therapy.
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