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[S.W.A.T Shadows Episode 1]

Quite well done!

Very well done, the animation style is excellent the story was interesting. The story ended VERY abruptly, the guy was about to say something else and it was cut a little late you might want to work on the transition for the next part. The only other issue was the voice track, the voice actors were very flat, I understand you are working with friends and its not easy to come by good voice talent for flash movies, Its just something to be aware of & something to work on. Maybe have readings and practice it a bit more if you have time to do so, if not its still a very passable movie but, with better voice acting you could see some real recognition. All in all a well done movie keep up the good work. (It may have potential for video game spin offs in the future as well, something else to think about)

LKLostKID responds:

Hi NinjaC7, Im happy your enjoyed the style, I really wanted something remember-able and cute but at the same time.. kick ass, So I turned to this simplified style. The Story did end abruptly due carelessness of when movieclips within movieclip's finished, my apologises.

The voice actors are mostly from VoiceActingAlliance forums.. I'm very new to having voice acting in my animations and script writing a believable story.. Casting was a rush.. and so was the script. I never really thought id finish this so its a bit of a shock. Now with it out of the way i'd like to sit down and properly organise bit by bit and take time with everything.. Ie.. Storyboards... organising audio, artwork.. etc.

Video game wise I used to have an older account.. my animations were... well.. okay I suppose, and I made an old crappy FPS game.. which was crappy.. I used buttons on enemy's it was just bad. I have worked on many games since and know how to approach games now.. so maybe in the future there will be a new game with SWAT on the title :)

Thank you for your review and your comments and thoughts will be taken into account into making a better sequel.

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HAHAHA, 5

stoners-lunchbox responds:

HAHAHA. Thanks!